Sunday, August 1, 2010

Rosa Fanfiction Review

Tinker Bell and Friends

This fan-fiction basically is for fairies who lived in Pixie Hollow and this is the secret heart of Never Land. All fairies lived in the old maple tree grown in Pixie Hollow and in this house there live hundreds of fairies and sparrow men. Tinker Bell is a fairy who have a talent for making pots and these pots fairies in Pixie Hollow used it for their cooking. Actually all fairies in the Pixie Hollow each one of them have their own talents. In this fanfic is about the new fairy arrived in Pixie Hollow and the queen told all fairies to welcome the new fairy to the family. Tinker Bell is a very friendly fairy in the whole place in Pixie Hollow. She always help out her friends when they need any kind of help. The writer of this fanfiction of Tinker Bell random the whole story in the way that children will like to read more about Tinker Bell the fairy who lived in Pixie Hollow with lots of fairies and their queen.


Tinker Bell and the lost treasure

This fanfic is very happy ending when this poor little girl want to play outside with the rain. However in the land she lived is always sunny and she think that having sun everyday are not much fun. One day she stood next to her window and dreaming about having a rain instead of sun. She also want to own a cloud and this can make her easier to control the cloud to get raining if she want it any time she needs it. After that she fall asleep and she woke up in the morning her friend Dizzy already soaking wet. She thought her friend just come from the beach, however, Dizzy told her that she actually had a lovely time in the rain outside. Rani didn't know that she actually asked for this to happen that she is going to have and control the cloud. So where ever she went the cloud follow and the poor land actually raining all days. All fairies are so angry and disappointed that they not able to finish their works because they don't have more sun but the every day in Pixie Hollow always. Tinker Bell found her friend outside and they want to go and looked for the lost treasure. This treasure is the most important in the life of fairies in Pixie Hollow. What a found in the story is not exactly Tinker Bell who looked for the lost treasure as the writer of the fan-fiction wrote about, however in the story of the Tinker Bell, it was Rida who was looking for the lost treasure.


Vidia and the Fairy Crown

This fanfic is about the two fairies name Beck and Rosetta. Vidia is basically be banned from the place of fairies because she actually stole some feather from the Mother Dove and attached to herself to make her fly faster and she got punished from this for what she did. What happen when all fairies got busy with there works and duties and after that the Crown had been stolen from the queen closet. The fairy who discovered this went and told the queen of what was happen to the crown. The queen called the meeting agented and everybody come and they quite shocked what is this meeting are about. When everybody arrived the queen told them the party has been cancel. Everybody murmured and whispered a each other without any words. The queen made an announcement that the crown had been lost from the closet. Everybody turned t Vidia because they believed that she is the one she possible stole the crown. After that Vidia made a decision that she is going to do a private investigation for the lost crown to proved the queen and all he fairies in the Pixie Hollow she didn't took it.


Fawn and the chipmunk

This fanfic is about what was happen in the story of Tinker bell he fairy in Pixie Hollow when Fawn the fairy went for walk in the forest. This story is kind of friendship in between fairy and animal in the forest. Fawn is a fairy who had more responsible with animal and she able to communicate with animal as well. She actually spent more time with animals instead of fairies, while she in the forest she saw some feathers and a chipmunk and she quite shock when she saw this. Finally she saw that the chipmunk had been attached by a hawk and the chipmunk got injured very bad. After what Fawn determine to help the chipmunk, however the chipmunk died when the hawk attacked him.What I think about the story has been written by the writer of this fanfiction was writing about Fawn put some bandage to fixed the chipmunk cuts from the attacked from the hawk and also she mention that the chipmunk still breathing. However, what I found in the story, that chipmunk died from the hawk attacked.


Snow White


This fanfic is a story that had a happy ending. Snow White is a the King and Queen daughter and after years the queen passed away. Snow White is a prettiest girl in the whole kingdom and there is a queen who lived in the same kingdom. She actually don't want to hear any words or news that someone in the village are more pretty than her. the queen have a mirror and every day she turned to the mirror and asked. Mirror, mirror on the wall, who's the prettiest of them all? The mirror told the selfish queen that Snow White is the prettiest of them all. The selfish queen got very angry and she ordered the servant to take Show White and killed her in the forest or anywhere that she never been seen by anyone. The servant took her to the forest and he lived her there.



Snow White and the Seven Dwarf Cousins

This fanfic is about the seven dwarf cousins are quite happy that their cousins are able to visit them. Seven Dwarf normally go to the mine to collected gold from the morning until night. However the day they actually went to the mine to collected gold and they want to come home early to prepared everything for their coming guests. When the seven dwarf came home they are really tired and no one want to do anything. Few minutes later the girl appeared from somewhere that the dwarf didn't know where is this beautiful girl come from. After the girl arrived she called out her friends to come and help out to clean the whole house for guests they will arrived soon. What I think about this fanfic is well prepared and and also the writer are more familiar with the story of Snow White very well.





Snow White and the poison

This fanfic is about the the girl who actually still about the stepmother try to killed her step-daughter because when ever she asked the mirror and the mirror told her that Snow White is the prettiest girl on the world. The stepmother got angry and she want to poison her. She bought a nicest and fine apple and put some poison in it and there she went to look for Snow White. She found her and turn herself to an old poor woman and she asked her if she want to buy an apple. Snow White felt sorry for her and she bought the apple and she took a huge bite and there she got poison from the apple from the witch, however she actually didn't know that the apple is already been poison from her stepmother.





Happy Ever After

This fanfic is the end of the story when Snow White died and the poor 7 brothers of her felt so sad and disappointed for what was happen to their sister. However while these brothers sad around the coffin and finally the handsome guy came along on the horse. He asked the 7 brothers what happen to their sister. The dwarf told him that their sister died because she been poison by someone. The prince hopped off from his horse and he went straight to the coffin and he bend down and kissed the beautiful girl in the coffin. Finally Snow White awaken and the prince took her to his palace and getting married afterward.




















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